You knew my spirits were pure like 24 karat gold
I was innocent just like a three year old
Totally innocent and pure
Completely innocent and pure
You knew my sacrifice
No limit was suffice
I was ready for anything for you
I was ready to die for you
What happened?
With you, paradise descended?
Bringing unbounded happiness, “you”
And I slept under the influence of you
I got lost in you, a strange dream
When I woke up with a scream
You were gone leaving me to survive
No dream left for me, no dream to revive
Thank God!!! You left for me some task
Some questions for me to live on, to ask
And I ask those questions, why?
Through them I live with you by asking: why why why?
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Thank you Komlet.
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nanua...
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Thank you very much Sampath. Appreciate it.
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thanks...
i did find it diifcult to read some of the poems as i am not excellent in hindi..
i liked this...
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Thank you very much Barin. Appreciate it.
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Very beautiful poem, indeed, expressing the deep feeling in a human heart that is hurt. Often, similar situaions occur in human relations, resulting in a broken and sad heart. But my advice to such a sufferer is to ask him/her to rise and get up and forget the bad dream and the unworthy companion for ever and proceed ahead anew!!!

Barin Chaki
06-04-2008
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Thank you very much Raj Saahib. Appreciate your comments and readership.
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Dear Lakshmi How wonderful is your comment "Exam first and then the lesson".
Thank you so much.
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A wonderful and deeply questioning poem about relationships...
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nanua,
That is a really desperate cry of "Why" but often, we get no answers and have to carry on.......there is a quote (can't remember now from whom) that says that life gives us the exam first and then teaches us the lesson on which the exam was based!!!! So true, I feel........
Lakshmi
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